Work with a partner to see if you can rewrite one of these  to ‘Show not Tell’

I felt angry.

My fist were tight and my face was red.

It was a sunny day.

I was bright red face sweat dripping fanning myself.

It was cold at the beach.

Brainstorm as many different ideas as you can that show that it was cold at the beach.

The great ocean conveyor movers water around the globe. Cold water has a higher density than warm water.

Now try to write a paragraph using these ideas that shows it was cold at the beach, without using the words beach or cold (don't just switch the word cold to another adjective such as freezing as that is still just telling. - Try to show that you are cold. Think about how you are feeling/what you are doing/what you see/hear/feel to help show this.

The great ocean conveyor movers water around the globe. Cold water has a higher density than warm water.

It can refer to temperature,passion,friendliness,and even your personality.

It means that they use their logic more when they are making a decision than the emotional people like myself. Being emotionally cold to me, means that person shows very little emotions, especially the negative ones.